Vanishing Point

Vanishing Point

An Original Short Story by Tim McGuinness, Ph.D.

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The hum began somewhere east of Flagstaff, or that was when Ruth first noticed it, which is not the same thing.

It sat under the engine. Not in it. The motorhome had a voice of its own, a heavy contented growl that Walter had loved and she had tolerated, and under that voice, a half-step flat, there was a second sound, thin as a wire, that did not rise with the throttle or fall when she eased off. She turned the radio up. The hum went on beneath the radio. She turned the radio off and drove for forty miles listening to it and could not decide whether it was a belt going bad, or the wind in the roof vent, or her own blood.

She had left the house on a Tuesday. She told herself she was going to sell the motorhome in Phoenix, where the season was better, and she had put a folder of Walter’s maintenance records on the passenger seat to make it true. Somewhere past Phoenix, the folder was still there, and she had not stopped. The desert opened and went on opening. The road pointed at a place where its two edges met and became one line and then became nothing, and she kept driving at it, and it kept being the same distance away.

There was a number she was not thinking about. It had five figures before the decimal and it had been six before the second wire transfer, and it was most of what Walter had left, and it had gone to a fake man named Thomas who wrote to her every morning for eight months and had a photograph of a lake house and a daughter in braces and a voice on the phone and WhatsApp she could still hear when the motorhome was quiet. She had not told her children. Her daughter would have cried and her son would have gone very calm and asked her questions in the order a lawyer asks them, and either of those was worse than the number.

The hum was there at the rest stop outside Kingman, too, with the engine off. That was when she knew it was not the belt.

The odd woman was sitting on the low wall by the vending machines with a canvas bag between her feet and no car anywhere in the lot. She was not young. She was not old, either, though her hair had gone the color of the sand behind her and she held herself the way people hold themselves after a long time carrying something. When Ruth came out of the restroom the woman looked at her, not the way strangers look, but the way you look at someone you are fairly sure you have met.

“You’re going west,” the woman said.

“I don’t pick up hitchhikers.”

“That’s sensible.” She did not move. “I’m going to the Vanishing Point. It’s on your way. Everything is, out here.”

Ruth should have walked to the motorhome. She had a lifetime of walking to the car, and she could feel the shape of the movement in her legs. Instead, she said, “What’s at the Vanishing Point?”

“The Weaver.”

“I don’t know what that is.”

“No,” the woman said. “You wouldn’t yet. But you can hear it. That’s why you stopped listening to the radio.”

Ruth stood in the heat with the keys in her hand. The hum was in her, in the bone behind her ear, flat and patient, and she had told no living person about it because there was no one to tell and nothing to say.

“My name is Lois,” the woman said, and picked up her bag.

Lois did not talk much. That was the first mercy. She sat in Walter’s seat with the folder of maintenance records on her lap, unopened, and looked at the road, and after an hour or so she began, very quietly, to hum.

It was not a tune Ruth knew. It went around and came back to itself, four notes, five, a small turning figure that did not resolve, and the strange thing, the thing that made Ruth’s hands tighten on the wheel, was that while Lois hummed, the sound under the engine drew closer to true. Not all the way. A quarter-step. The wire lost some of its edge. When Lois stopped, it slid flat again, slowly, the way a held door swings shut.

“What is that?” Ruth said, and did not mean the tune.

“It’s the sound of the weave when the Weaver can’t hold the note,” Lois said it the way you would say it’s the sound of the transmission. “It’s been going for a while. Since before Flagstaff. Since before the motorhome, I’d guess.”

“I don’t know what you’re talking about.”

“You do.” Lois looked at her, and there was nothing unkind in it and nothing soft, either. “Every morning you wake up and something in you puts the world together. Where the coffee is. Who you are. Which of the people in your life can be believed, and how far. What your name is worth. You never noticed it working because it never once failed. It wove, and you walked out onto the weave and stood on it and called it your life.”

Ruth drove. The road pointed at the place where its edges met.

“Then someone pulled one thread,” Lois said. “Hard. Not cut. Pulled. And the whole pattern slid, and the Weaver in you felt it go and lost the note, and has been flat ever since, trying to find it. That’s the hum. That’s all it is. That’s not nothing, but it’s all it is.”

“And the Vanishing Point.”

“Is where the threads meet,” Lois said.

“And what happens there?” Replied Ruth.

Lois was quiet for a mile.

“I’ll tell you when we’re closer,” she said, which Ruth would learn was the only kind of lie Lois ever told.

The first exit came at dusk.

There was nothing on the sign but an arrow, and there should not have been a town there at all; the map showed a hundred miles of nothing between Kingman and the state line, but there were lights ahead on the right and a low building with a neon coffee cup, and Ruth’s foot came off the gas before she had decided anything.

“You don’t have to,” Lois said.

“I’m hungry.”

“All right.”

The diner was warm and full of the smell of bacon and the lights were the yellow lights of a place that had been open a long time. The waitress said, “Ruth, honey, sit anywhere,” and Ruth sat, and only when the coffee was in front of her did she understand that she had never been here in her life and the waitress had known her name.

Lois ate pie. Ruth had a plate in front of her and did not remember ordering it.

There was a man at the counter.

She knew the shoulders first, the way you know a voice before a word is finished. He was in a gray jacket. He turned on the stool, and his face was the face from the photographs, older by the eight months exactly, and tired, and when he saw her something went across it that was not a performance; she had seen enough performances now to know it was shame, plain shame, and he got up and came to the booth and stood there with his hands at his sides.

“Ruth,” he said.

She could not speak.

“I’ve been trying to find you. I went to the house. I’ve got it.” He put an envelope on the table, a bank envelope, and slid it toward her with two fingers. “All of it. A cashier’s check. I know it doesn’t undo anything. I know that. I just couldn’t. I couldn’t live with it. There’s a real daughter, Ruth. That part was true. She’s the one who made me.”

The envelope sat by her coffee. The check inside would have five figures before the decimal, and it would have six before that, and she could feel it, the whole slid pattern of the last eight months sliding back, the threads tightening, the house un-emptying, her son’s calm questions never asked.

Lois ate her pie.

“Say something,” Thomas said, or the man with his face said.

Ruth looked at Lois. “You’re not going to tell me.”

“Not unless you ask.”

“I’m asking.”

Lois put her fork down. “The check won’t clear,” she said, “because this diner isn’t on the map. Nothing you carry out of here will still be in your hand at the next mile marker. That’s not a rule I made. It’s just how the wrong places are. They’re woven out of the one thread you want most, and that’s the only thread they’ve got, and it’s not enough to hold weight.”

“You don’t know that.”

“I sat in this booth,” Lois said. “Different man. Same envelope.”

The waitress refilled her coffee. Outside the window, the lot was full of the motorhome and nothing else, and beyond it the desert went out flat to a horizon that was still there, still that same distance, still pointing.

Thomas said, “Please.”

It was the hardest thing she had done since Walter, and she had buried Walter. She stood up. She left the envelope where it was. She did not look at him again, because she knew that if she looked at him she would see that he meant it, and it would not matter that he meant it, and she did not want to carry that particular fact any further than she had to.

In the lot the hum was very loud.

Lois got in and put the folder back on her lap and did not say anything for a long time, and then she said, “That one’s always first. It’s the one that costs the most to walk out of, and it’s the one you can’t stop walking out of, because it’ll be there again some night when you’re tired. That’s not failure. That’s just where the exit is.”

Ruth pulled onto the highway. After a while, and she did not decide this either, she hummed one note, badly, flat, into the dark of the cab, and the wire under the engine moved a hair toward her.

She slept in the back, in the bed that had been Walter’s side and hers, and Lois slept in the passenger seat with her jacket over her, and in the morning there was a town.

It was a real town, or it looked like one. A water tower, a grain elevator standing in the wrong state, a main street. Ruth drove in because the road went in and there was no way around, and the first billboard was her face.

It was the photograph from her church directory, twelve feet tall, and under it, in the red letters they use for accidents, the number. The exact number. To the cent.

The second billboard was the same. The gas station had a sandwich board on the sidewalk with the number written in chalk. The man pumping gas across the way looked up and said it, out loud, the whole number, the way you’d say good morning, and went back to his tank. A woman with a stroller said it. Two boys on bikes said it and laughed. There was no cruelty in any of their faces. It was simply what everyone knew.

“Don’t stop,” Lois said.

“I need gas.”

“You have half a tank. Don’t stop.”

But there was a cruiser at the corner by the courthouse with its lights turning and a man beside it with his thumbs in his belt, and it was her son. It was Michael, older than he was, gray at the sides, in a sheriff’s uniform that fit him, and he looked at the motorhome the way he looked at people on the news, and his eyes went across her face and did not stay.

She stopped.

She rolled the window down, and the heat came in, and she said, “Michael.”

“Ma’am.”

“Michael, it’s me.”

“I know who you are, ma’am. Everybody does.” He nodded at the billboard. “You want to move that vehicle along. This isn’t a town you can park in.”

“I didn’t. It wasn’t. He had a daughter, Michael; he had a lake house, I saw the deed, I called the bank, I did everything you would have done, I did everything right and it still, it still.”

“Yes, ma’am,” her son said, in the voice she had heard him use on telephone solicitors. “That’s what they all say.”

Lois’s hand was on her arm.

“He’s not here,” Lois said. “Michael’s in Denver and he doesn’t know, and when he does know he is not going to be this. This is the version of him you built out of the worst thing you can imagine, and you built it well, because you love him, and because you are very tired. It’s still not him.”

“He’s right there.”

“The billboards are right there too. Do you think the town went out and had them printed?”

Ruth looked at the courthouse, at the water tower with her number painted around its belly, at the people going about their ordinary business saying the sum of her ruin to each other like weather.

“It was my fault,” she said.

“That’s what this town is for,” Lois said. “It’s the one place in the whole desert where everybody agrees with you. It’s very restful. Nobody argues. You can stay as long as you want, and every day the number gets a little bigger, because they add the interest, and every day Michael looks a little less like Michael, and you’ll never notice, because you’ll be so grateful that at last everyone sees what you see.”

She did not know she had let the brake off until the cruiser was behind them.

The sheriff did not follow. In the mirror he was only a man by a car, and then the road turned, and then there was no town, only the map’s hundred miles of nothing that had been there all along.

The hum was worse after the town. She had thought, having walked out of two of them, that it would be better, and it was not. It was as if every exit she refused made the road itself less willing to be a road.

“That’s the Anarchis,” Lois said, when Ruth said something about it.

“The what?”

“The old word. It’s not a thing. It’s not out there.” Lois nodded at the desert. “It’s the pull. You can feel it in the wheel, a little to the right, toward the shoulder. That’s all it ever is. A voice that says, stop the engine, it’s a long way and you don’t know where the end is, it’s hot, you’re tired, sit here a while. Let them go. Let the threads go. They were only ever threads.”

Ruth felt it. She had been feeling it since Flagstaff, and she had called it fatigue, and she had called it grief, then thought maybe this is trauma, and it was those things too, but under them it was a pull toward the gravel, and it did not get louder the way the hum did. It got more reasonable.

“What happens if you pull over?”

“Nothing,” Lois said. “That’s the whole of it. Nothing happens, and nothing keeps happening, and the weave comes apart very slowly and very quietly and there’s no one in the cab to hear it go.”

“You sound like you know.”

“I pulled over,” Lois said. “Outside a town like that one. I sat on the shoulder for eleven months. Someone came by, eventually. Someone who hummed.”

Ruth drove. She kept the wheel a little to the left, against the pull, which was how she had been driving for two hundred miles without knowing why.

The city came at noon, out of a heat shimmer, and it was Los Angeles, or it had Los Angeles’s bones. The freeway lifted them up onto its long concrete back and the towers stood in the haze and the traffic was thick and slow, and every driver in every car had Thomas’s face.

Not similar. His. The gray jacket. The tired, decent eyes. In the truck beside her, in the sedan ahead, a woman in a convertible with Thomas’s face under a sun hat, a child in a car seat with Thomas’s face, looking at her, all of them looking at her.

She said, “Lois.”

“I know.”

“Make it stop.”

“I can’t. Keep driving.”

The faces changed. That was worse. She looked at the driver of the truck and it was Walter, Walter at forty, at the wheel of a truck he had never owned, and he looked at her with love and she knew, she knew in the part of her that had learned, that it was a mask, that under it was Thomas, that under Thomas was nothing at all, and the love on Walter’s face was the same love that had been in the messages every morning for eight months, and she could not tell them apart, she had never been able to tell them apart, that was the whole of it, that was the thing she could not forgive.

The child in the car seat was Michael. The woman in the convertible was her daughter Anne. Every face she had ever trusted was in the traffic wearing itself like a costume, and she understood, with the terrible clarity the wrong places lend you, that she would never again know. That there was no way to know. That the face you love and the face that is lying to you are the same face, exactly the same, and anyone who says otherwise is a child.

She turned her head, and Lois had Thomas’s face.

Ruth hit the brake. The motorhome shuddered in the crawl of traffic, and the folder slid off Lois’s lap onto the floor.

“Get out.”

“Ruth.”

“Get out of my vehicle. Get out. I don’t know you; I picked you up at a rest stop. I don’t know one true thing about you. Get out.”

Lois did not move, and did not argue, and her face was Thomas’s face, and then it was Walter’s, and then, while Ruth watched, it was a woman she did not know, plainly, sitting in the passenger seat of a motorhome with a folder at her feet, and it did not go back.

“This is the city where you can’t tell,” Lois said, and her voice was her own. “It’s not lying to you about that. You can’t. Not by the face. Not ever. It’s true. That’s why it’s the hardest one to leave, because the town of blame at least had the decency to be wrong about something. This place is right. You can’t tell by the face.”

“Then what?” Ruth asked.

“By what they do when it costs them. By whether they’re still there in the morning. By whether they ask you for anything. By time. Only ever by time.” Lois bent and picked the folder up off the floor and set it on her lap. “I haven’t asked you for anything but a ride, and I’ve been in this seat two days, and the pie was on me. That’s not proof. There’s no proof. It’s just the only thing there is, and it’s enough to drive on.”

The traffic moved. Ruth looked straight ahead, at the road, at the place where it vanished between the towers, and did not look at any faces at all, and drove. Lois picked up the humming again, the small unresolved figure, and after a while, hating herself, hating the sound of it in her own throat, Ruth hummed with her.

The freeway came down out of the city onto sand.

The last exit was her house.

She knew it from the highway. She knew the mailbox. It stood alone in the desert with no street and no neighbors, her house, the porch light on, and the sun was going down behind it the way it went down behind it every evening in the kitchen window, and she said, “No,” and turned in.

Lois said nothing.

Ruth parked at the curb that was not there and walked up the walk. The door was unlocked, because it always had been, in that life, and the kitchen smelled like the kitchen, and a woman was at the counter with her back to the door, making a salad, humming.

Humming in tune.

The woman turned. She was fifty-eight, and she was Ruth, and she had never received a letter from a man named Thomas because it was three years before the first one, and Walter was in the den with the game on, she could hear it, and this woman’s face had a thing in it that Ruth had not seen in a mirror in a very long time and had not known she was missing. It was ease. It was the face of someone standing on a weave she had never once had to think about.

“You’re back early,” the woman said, and smiled, and went on chopping.

Ruth stood in her own doorway.

She could stay. She knew it the way she had known the check would not clear, in the same organ. She could hang her keys on the hook and sit at the table and tell this woman nothing, and Walter would come in from the den at the commercial and kiss the top of her head, and she would be three years back, and the threads would be whole, and the Weaver would hold the note without trying, and she would never have to learn to hum.

It would not be a wrong place. That was the thing. It would be the truest place she had ever been. It just would not be now.

The woman at the counter said, “Is somebody out there with you?”

“A friend,” Ruth said. “She’s waiting.”

“Well, ask her in.”

“She won’t come in,” Ruth said, and understood it as she said it. “She’s not allowed. Not here. Not by you. You wouldn’t know what to say to her, and she’d know that, and she’d sit in the RV.”

The woman looked at her, puzzled, kind, her whole life ahead of her and behind her at once, a woman who did not yet know what she was going to be able to survive.

“I love you,” Ruth said to her, which she had never once said to herself in fifty-eight years, and went back down the walk in the dusk, and did not look at the den window, and got in.

Lois had her eyes closed. She opened them.

“That’s all of them,” she said.

They drove the night through.

The hum was still there, and it was still flat, but it had changed in a way Ruth could not have described to anyone, and had no one to describe it to. It was no longer under the engine. It was in the cab. It was hers. She could feel where it was wrong the way you can feel where a tooth is wrong, and, feeling it, she could feel, very faintly, for a second at a time, where it would be right.

“Sing to it,” she said, near three in the morning. “You know the song. You’ve known it the whole way. Sing to the Weaver and fix it and we can both stop.”

Lois had been waiting for this. Ruth could tell. It was the only thing in three days she had seen the woman brace for.

“I can’t sing it for you,” Lois said. “I can sing next to you while you learn it.”

“That’s not enough.”

“No,” Lois said. “It isn’t. It’s what there is. This is the way.”

And she began the figure again, the four notes, the five, the turn that did not resolve, and Ruth, with the wheel a little to the left against the pull, with the road pointing at a horizon that was no nearer at three in the morning than it had been at noon outside Flagstaff, opened her mouth and sang it. Badly. Flat. A half-step under Lois for the first two turns and a quarter-step under for the third, and on the fourth, for the length of one held note, exactly with her, and in that second the sound in the cab was one sound and not two, and the Weaver in her, the thing that had been trying since before the motorhome, found the note it had lost and held it.

For one note.

Then she lost it again. Of course she did. Lois went on humming, unbothered, and Ruth went on driving, and a little while later she found it again, for two.

The rest stop was nowhere. It had a low wall and a vending machine that was not lit and a horizon on every side. The sky was going gray in the east.

Lois picked up her bag.

“This is you?” Ruth asked.

“This is me.”

“There’s nothing here.”

“There’s a road.” Lois nodded at the desert, and Ruth looked, and there was a second road, a thin one, going off at an angle from the highway toward a horizon of its own. “Mine’s that way. It always was. I just needed to get this far along yours to find it again. It works like that, sometimes. You get further on your own road by sitting in someone else’s cab for a while.”

“What about the Vanishing Point?”

Lois smiled, and it was the first time.

“Look at it,” she said.

Ruth looked. The highway went out ahead of the motorhome, straight, and its two edges leaned together the way they had leaned together for six hundred miles it seemed, and met, and became a line, and became nothing.

“That’s it,” Lois said. “That’s where the threads meet. You never get there. You drive at it every day of your life, and it stays exactly that far, and the driving is the thing. The driving is the whole of the thing. Nobody arrives. Anyone who tells you they arrived is selling you a diner.”

She got out. She stood in the gray light with her canvas bag and put a hand flat on the hot side of the motorhome, once, the way you touch a horse.

“Every morning,” she said. “Before the coffee, if you can. It’ll be flat. Sing it anyway.”

Then she went, at her angle, on her thin road, that seemed like it was yellow in this light, and did not look back, and Ruth sat in the cab with the engine running and watched until the heat shimmer took her, and then a while longer.

Then she pulled out onto the highway that now too seemed yellow and drove west, at the place where the road vanished, and it stayed where it was, and she hummed.

The kitchen in March was the kitchen. Same window, same light coming across the counter the way it had come across the counter for thirty-one years. Ruth had not sold the motorhome. It sat in the drive under a tarp, and some mornings she went out and sat in it for ten minutes before work, though she could not have said why, and did not try.

She hummed while the coffee dripped.

It was flat. It was flat most mornings. Some mornings it was close, and one morning in February it had been exactly right for the length of an entire verse, and she had stood there with the pot in her hand and cried, and then poured the coffee, because the coffee was ready.

The number was still the number. Nothing had come back, and nothing was going to. She had told Anne, in January, on the zoom call, and Anne had cried, as she had known Anne would, and it had not been worse than the number. It had been, in the way that these things are, slightly better. Michael, she had not told yet. She had decided she would tell him in April. She did not know where that certainty came from, but it was there, in the same organ that had known the check would not clear, and she had learned to trust that organ a little further than she trusted any face.

The hum was hers. That was the difference. It sat in the kitchen with her while the light came across the counter, flat, patient, a half-step under, and every morning, before the coffee if she could and after it if she couldn’t, she put her voice next to it and reached for the note, and some days found it, and then went to work.

Nobody had fixed it. There had been no one at the Vanishing Point. There was no Vanishing Point. There was a horizon, and a road that pointed at it, and a woman in a kitchen with a cup in her hand, humming.

Postscript

Each of us has a hum, a tone only we know. As we go along the road, it can get lost, but the goal is not to reach the end but to find your hum again.

Sometimes Lois or someone else is with you, sometimes not. Sometimes you stop in blame town. Some never leave. Or they get lost in the traffic. Listen to those who have travelled the way to the Vanishing Point; they know what’s real. But the truest lesson is simply this: don’t stop, and in time you will find your way home.

Keep humming. Keep driving. It’s not the vanishing point that never seems to get closer that matters; it is the hum and the road that sometimes looks golden yellow.

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“Vanishing Point”
By Dr. Tim McGuinness
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